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'September Song' draft page 7

Geoffrey Hill notebook cover
Introduction to the writing 'September Song' resource.
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'September Song' drafts 1, 'King Log Notebook IV'
First page of notes towards 'September Song'/
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'September Song' drafts 2
Second manuscript draft for 'September Song' by Geoffrey Hill.
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'September Song' drafts 3
Third manuscript draft for 'September Song' by Geoffrey Hill.
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'September Song' drafts 4
Fourth manuscript draft for 'September Song' by Geoffrey Hill.
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'September Song' drafts 5, 'King Log Notebook V'
Fifth draft for 'September Song' by Geoffrey Hill.
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'September Song' drafts 6
Sixth manuscript draft for 'September Song' by Geoffrey Hill.
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'September Song' draft 7
Latest draft for 'September Song'
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The final typed draft of 'September Song' with handwritten revisions in two separate coloured pens, suggesting Hill returned to this draft twice. This annotated draft is very close to the published version of the poem. 

Taken from '[King Log] Notebook V 1966 - 67' (BC MS 20c Hill/2/1/6).