Writing a poetic translation: translating dialect
Simon Armitage – translating Gawain
Evolving drafts of 'Once the siege...'
First version of ‘Once the siege…’ in the Gawain notebook
Second version of ‘Once the siege…’ in the Gawain notebook
Third version of ‘Once the siege…’ in the Gawain notebook
Early drafts of ‘Once the siege…’
First draft of ‘Once the siege…’
Second draft of ‘Once the siege…’
'Now through England's realm...' in the Gawain notebook
First version of 'Now through England's realm...' in the Gawain notebook
Second version of 'Now through England's realm...' in the Gawain notebook
Third version of 'Now through England's realm...' in the Gawain notebook
Early notes for 'Now through England's realm...'
Second draft of 'Now through England's realm...'
Writing a poetic translation: defending the work
Writing a poetic translation: translating dialect
Writing a poetic translation: pronunciation
This page of notes continues Armitage's defence of, or explanation for, various elements of Gawain.
The dialect words in the centre of the page – “bide”, “laike”, “childer”, “barlow” and “samen” amongst others – show Armitage listing words from Gawain that were familiar to him as Yorkshire dialect, which possibly helped him to identify with the Gawain poet.
Armitage uses dialect terms throughout his translation. Some are a direct crossover from the original, and some have made their way into other sections of the poem.
For example: “every hill wore a hate of mizzle on its head” (l. 2081). Mizzle is derived from the Middle English word “misy” (swamp or bog) and is still current in parts of the UK in the form of “mizzle” (drizzling rain).






















